Sunday, July 24, 2016

Fraener's Past (APS) Pg16



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*Bangs head against wall*

I. Hate. Drawing. Wings.

6 comments:

  1. Is this like Pokemon? Where different types are "super effective" against others?

    Unfortunately I don't think fire and electric are strong/weak against eachother but may that's not fire or electric.

    Fraener uses Mean Look (or something)
    Wayra can't escape!
    Wayra tried to flee!
    Can't escape!
    Freaner uses Ember!/[insert decent fire move here]
    It's a critical hit!
    Wayra is inflicted with burn?
    Wayra uses Hydro Pump!
    It's super effective!
    ...
    Perhaps Freaner's ability comes to use?

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    1. If this was something like pokemon, I'd have probably just come up with a type chart of super and not very effective moves for you guys. But as it is, Fraener and Wayra just do 'neutral damage' to each other.

      Although I like the battle scenario you made for them! :)

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  2. Now a little bit of critisicm. I'm pretty sure Wayra is a "Cracklar" so like, electric.

    Wayra's blast looks more water to me. Hence the move, Hydro Pump. I don't know if this was done on purpose or not but just putting it out there.

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    1. Simple explanation. I forgot to add spark effects, and I was too lazy to fix it when I realized my mistake, so I thank you for noticing!

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  3. Hi ^-^ Thanks for granting me luck with my drawing last time. It's not back to normal yet, but I guess it'll go away with time. I just took a break from it.

    BTW, is Fraener's arm a little too long from the first picture? It looks like one and a half of the usual length joined together (at least to me, maybe it's just me, because I usually measure my characters' arm lengths from their elbows in order to avoid going wrong.)

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    1. Yeah... I'm still having troubles with body shapes 'n stuff. I'm getting slightly better, but not fast enough for my taste. (And I usually just go with what my gut tells me. I hardly ever measure how long or wide something is, because I usually just get mixed up)

      ... But compared to the first page of this comic, I have been improving!

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